An Odyssey

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    Llamaman713
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    In this game you have to go on a quest to find out what happened to your brother. Everyone thinks he is dead, but you know better.

     

    P.S, I will take suggestions for the rest of the game and series.

    Play the game here:

    #3557

    deWiTTERS
    Keymaster

    It’s already really good! Make sure you don’t make your levels too big. The first level is really good though. But for some of the bigger levels, make them a bit smaller, and fill them up with all kinds of cool stuff.

    Keep on developing! 🙂

    #3558

    Comprehensible
    Moderator

    Hey, this is a good start! I like the idea of a hero’s journey – very exciting! As deWiTTERS said, the areas are a little big, and they definitely could benefit from some detail. There’s some really nice little things you can sprinkle in to add flavor to any scene like bottles, books, and paintings. Take a look! Also, there’s a small typo in Jake’s speech in the room the_ritual – I think it’s supposed to be brat instead of brst. Great work! I can’t wait to see how this progresses!

    #3559

    greatGam3R
    Participant

    Cool, but you should add more things that make the game feel, I dunno, immersive? Like instead of a bland land with a few crates here and there, add some more life to it, like trees, animals, decorations, more houses? Anyway, the concept of the story is nice, and I look forward to seeing more levels of this. Also, one question what was the mysterious dude at the ritual saying…?

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