BloodLine Royal Short RPG Story

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    vinniexx
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    a boy runs away from home to later find a village that his grandfather lives in his grandfather is also the king and is dying there village is going broke and as the boy runs away from home his father end up dying so that make the boy next in line to rule his grandfather pleads with him to rule before he dies and his mom tells him he need to go out and find help for them before everybody dies off

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    #3452

    Comprehensible
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    Hey, this is a cool start to a game!

    I can tell you spent a lot of time with the scenery, it looks really good! One piece of advice would be to limit the amount of text per line. If you put too much text, it can go outside the dialogue box, which makes it a bit hard to read.

    Great start, and I can’t wait to see what you make next!

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