This is a pretty good start! I can already see an improvement from Anime Camp; you made an actor speak! Great job!
There’s also lots of other functionalities to play around with, for instance, you can make lots of levels with doors to connect them. You can also decrease the size of the screen so it doesn’t feel like there’s as much empty space. Messing around with these functionalities can provide a lot of utility.
You are really clear and concise with your story. You immediately hook the player in with the opening line, which is pretty darn cool!
Great work, and I can’t wait to see how this progresses!