First Scene of Working Game

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  • #3965

    kalamaxander
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    This is an RPG that is being made with the help of two of my close friends.  This is the first game I have ever made.

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    #3975

    Comprehensible
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    Hey, this is a really cool start!

    I love the environments! They’re really pretty and well fleshed out. My favorite is the garden; all the detail makes it look super nice!

    I like your inclusion of the choice system, and it works really well for controlling the flow of the narrative in the scene “Home.” It does get a little unwieldy in the Dodge home, since not all the doors are locked, and you have to enter and exit a lot of them.

    Your world seems very interesting and well laid out! Some things need a little more explaining, like the fact that your mother and father are a robot, or the timeskip at the beginning. I think just one or two lines would make it much more clear to the player!

    Great work! This narrative seems really interesting, and I can’t wait to see how it plays out! 🙂

    #3977

    kalamaxander
    Participant

    Thanks for the feedback Comprehensible. I will work on the Dodge home one since a lot of other people I  know have commented on it as well.

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