I love the environments! They’re really pretty and well fleshed out. My favorite is the garden; all the detail makes it look super nice!
I like your inclusion of the choice system, and it works really well for controlling the flow of the narrative in the scene “Home.” It does get a little unwieldy in the Dodge home, since not all the doors are locked, and you have to enter and exit a lot of them.
Your world seems very interesting and well laid out! Some things need a little more explaining, like the fact that your mother and father are a robot, or the timeskip at the beginning. I think just one or two lines would make it much more clear to the player!
Great work! This narrative seems really interesting, and I can’t wait to see how it plays out! 🙂