This is really cool!
I love the story line, and I really really wanna know what happens next! Your environments are beautiful, and even though I don’t know a lot about the characters, they’re written in such a way that I can fill in the details. Some things that I think could be improved is the environments and game play. The environments, while ascetically pleasing, are not super varied. Also, I really like the game play you have now, with going around to different people to further the story line, so maybe you could do some puzzles, too!
Great work! This game has TONS of potential, and I really look forward to what you make next!