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mystify
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Very cute.
I think it’s funny how you have the player running back and forth from king/queen to father. (^_^)
There were 3 spelling/word errors that I found.

https://ibb.co/eRzEYS
“Through” not “Threw”

https://ibb.co/byQXL7
“Safe” not “Save”

https://ibb.co/b7votS
You said “This” twice.

Just a few things I caught.
I really thought it was a cute little story. (^_^)
One that could possibly have a sequel to it???

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