I think it’s funny how you have the player running back and forth from king/queen to father. (^_^)
There were 3 spelling/word errors that I found.
“Through” not “Threw”
“Safe” not “Save”
You said “This” twice.
Just a few things I caught.
I really thought it was a cute little story. (^_^)
One that could possibly have a sequel to it???