I like the overall story! It’s a bit confusing at times, and you have to use creators mode (wich is meant to be, I suppose…)
The story itself is really entertaining and fun! And I like the names – like “Hero” and “Quest” – they are hilarious xD!
Well, you could work a bit at the mapping, but I suppose 3 weeks is a bit short for indepth map designing… I have to know, since I spent most of the time working on the maps for my game…
All in all: Like your game! 🙂