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Hi Maeve,

I have checked your game and here is my feedback:

The plot is sadly not properly explained and you jump right into the game without backstory. The objective is not stated and the method of completion is stated beforehand. The objects and scenery in each area is too small to put on a background with lots of empty space.

I hope you will be able to improve based on the feedback.