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  • #32495
    slay
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    I’m trying to get my character to gather 3 separate ingredients before she can bake a pie. When she touches the oven, if she does not have all three tokens, she cannot bake it. It sounds kinda easy, but I’m struggling with this for some reason.

    What I’m having trouble with is wording or formatting it correctly. Has anyone tried this? What format are you using? I think I’ve tried to simplify it too much in my screenplay and it doesn’t even play the full thing.

    (This pie thing is meant to help me out with game design in general)

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    #32499
    Comprehensible
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    Hey Slay!

    Yeah, screenplays can be tricky. You need an else after every if to balance things out. Also, it may be easier to use “lacks” instead of has. Like this:

    Hope this helps!

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    #32528
    slay
    Participant

    Ahh thank you! I will give this a try today. I had a feeling I was oversimplifying it lol I appreciate the help, Comprehensible!

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    #32548
    Comprehensible
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    No problem! I really struggled with this stuff when I first started, so I get the feel. Good luck with your game!

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