Challenge: Best Plot

[Anonymous]

Hi! So, since one of my favourite parts of an RPG is the plot, I wanna post a challenge. If you’re making a game, I’d like to see the plot! So, here are the challenge conditions:

-Dialogue is minimized.

-Plot twists and drama.

-EXTRA: Interesting scenery.

Good luck! Send your game link as a reply! The deadline will be decided later on.

[Anonymous]

16/06 update: profile says I received a reply but I can’t find it

[Maeve]

It’s awaiting moderation. I responded. It is called the Adventures of Mr. Catterton

[Axemax]

I’d love to participate in your challenge, but the game I’m making is currently a, well, I’m still making it. so if you would check in every time I update, would that work? I still update often, maybe weekly I might finish a 3rd of the game or something. Does that work out, or not?

[Anonymous]

Hi, you can post the game when you’re done. Also, I don;t understand what you mean by “3rd of the game”, do you mean a third part? I will check out your game first.

[Anonymous]

Ok, I will search it up and check it out.

[Anonymous]

Hi Maeve,

I have checked your game and here is my feedback:

The plot is sadly not properly explained and you jump right into the game without backstory. The objective is not stated and the method of completion is stated beforehand. The objects and scenery in each area is too small to put on a background with lots of empty space.

I hope you will be able to improve based on the feedback.

-GameCode

[Macmor]

My first game,,,

Distant Worlds: CH1, Rated

It’s very heavy in dialogue though…and you’ll need at least 1 1/2hrs to finish it.

[Axemax]

as a 3rd of the game, i mean like fractions so I might finish that much of the game. To be honest, I think I will just ask for you to check Chapter 1 instead, since checking a WIP game over and over would be quite tedious.

[Anonymous]

This a nice game, and the premium features are so nice they make me jealous haha~. wasn’t able to finish the game though.

[Maeve]

The Adventures of Mr. Catterton:Here

[Fedorakid]

Are we able to submit games we already created or released?

[Anonymous]

yes you can post created/released games.

[Anonymous]

Reply to Axemax: The game is good but long, and maybe can add a few more health potions. overall very nice.

[Axemax]

yeah, maybe i should it’s a bit rough, thx for the reply tho

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