Distant Worlds Chapter 2: A Love Unbound.
Published 19.03.2022 11:03
by Macmor
Total plays: 433
Rated "M" (Mature content warning! Blood, alcohol references and descriptions of death) Chapter 2: A Love Unbound- The midnight meeting is looming. Re-join the cast and see if they can figure out what's happening. Approx. 1hr 15mins (1 Card to find) LONG LOADING TIME! PLEASE BE PATIENT!
This was *very* well done, movements and text were excellent throughout. Particularly I liked the slow steps forward as Vivi died, and that one soldier at the end retreating. My favorite scene was everything at the secret place, all the vignettes as time passed. That was effective, and a nice economic use of a single area. I also appreciated all the little things individual guards say if you try to speak with them, and I found the card! I think maybe it would be /wagons/ or /wains/ or a /caravan/ that the king takes to war rather than carts, but idk, and I did think it was strange to use the outhouse door on a normal building, but eh, small things. Also the first time I played, the king’s pathing got caught for a bit on the lower guard as he left the room. One typo that stood out – a missing apostrophe in the kiss paragraph, [It’s]. Do we need to call a vote of No Confidence on the Chancellor?
Thanks so much for the kind words @lemm. My drive has been waning lately and this is exactly what I needed right now. Made some fixes based on your observations. Glad you enjoyed it!
@ttocsmac I sent you new comments on the beta by email, it got pretty long and I didn’t want to stretch the comments section. 🙂
This game is amazing. I actually played this part when it had been combined with Chapter 1. Also, I just realized that Master Yang is a reference to FFIV
What to say? The game it`s just incredible, one of the best I played in my life! Can`t wait for the third chapter!
Damn! Thanks for that!