Love Story

Needs some work on spiffing up the scenes a little bit–some places could have used more detail, and there were some places that were left empty–but so far it is really good! As for the invisible maze–I’d highly recommend using the pure black tiles, I think they are in “inquisitor ground”… they will not allow you to pass, and you can cover the black tiles with ground tiles–with the invisible actors, you just end up saying “hello, hi” a lot. For the love story as well, it is really cute–but make sure to kind of show them falling in love with each other! As of now… it’s almost like it was love at first sight for both of them… and I think it’d actually be cuter if you sort of showed them falling in love for each other. Oh, and for the ending scene, it would be really cute if Ash had some dialogue in the darkness!
Hey–would you like to participate in my challenge by the way? Your game fulfills all 3 requirements! My challenge, due in 35 days, had the following requirements:
An unconventional main character
Flowers used to decorate the scenes
A love story

Yours easily fulfills all 3!